You did a really good job keeping your essay clean and concise. Every point that you made I felt you explored and tied up very neatly. You also somehow managed to fully support every claim and idea you made well below the maximum word count while exploring material that would likely have taken me 1500 or more words to do the same. One thing that could be improved upon is that you could either use longer versions of some of your quotes or you could give more background information of your quotes. Since you were a little low on words and you expressed your desire to add more content I would suggest further elaborating on your ideas with specific examples. The multimodal aspects of your paper are pretty solid and you don’t have much to fix in that aspect. Just a little clean up and it should be really good.
"Develop a passion for learning. If you do, you will never cease to grow."-Anthony J D'Angelo
