My major goals of revision are to do the normal clean up that I do to clean up my free draft (para organization, sentence length, surface errors, citations exc) due to the way I free draft. I need to cut at least 100 words if not more to get into word count. I need to add a narrative project into my paper which I forgot to do. Finally I want to revise my quotes and try to integrate them better since I did what I usually do.
The steps I will take to solve these goals are add narrative project to my third point (don’t want to not fill a requirement), do some routine clean up edits, look over the whole paper note what parts are expendable and make cuts, Finally I would like to change how I integrate my quotes to make them more effective.
I think that out of all of these my biggest challenge is going to be changing my quotes to be more effective which is going to be hard because I’ve made a habit out of integrating quotes in a certain way which is in general not the best way to integrate points and I would like to improve.
Finally my resources to fulfill my goals are my peers who help me revise, and Professor Emerson and Emmy by appointment.
