The section of the little seagull that I decided to read was the section on MLA citations. I was hoping that reading this chapter would help me cite sources and better understand the process of using citations and making a work cited page since I have never liked making citations and I have never been …
Category Archives: ENG110
Blog 14
My major goals of revision are to do the normal clean up that I do to clean up my free draft (para organization, sentence length, surface errors, citations exc) due to the way I free draft. I need to cut at least 100 words if not more to get into word count. I need to …
150 word note
You did a really good job keeping your essay clean and concise. Every point that you made I felt you explored and tied up very neatly. You also somehow managed to fully support every claim and idea you made well below the maximum word count while exploring material that would likely have taken me 1500 …
Multimodal statement
https://blog.reedsy.com/narrative-arc/ Listed above are links to three pieces of media that I plan to use as multi modal additions in my essay. two of these links lead to images I will use in my title (one is a source YouTube link I have the the image that I will use saved all ready). One image …
Blog 13
I think that the author has a really good point when she talks about the dangers of self narrative thinking. I am personally a sucker for siding with the side that less people agree with because I personally believe that humanities greatest threat is becoming an echo chamber of ideas where the societal norm of …
Blog 12
Moment one that caught my eye was when Beck said “A life story doesn’t just say what happened, it says why it was important.” It kind of stuck to me because it brought clarity to why I gave the self narrative that I did during my practice grad school interview. I didn’t put a ton …
peer review 2
Daisy Bryant note: Your organization as well as your content is very polished all ready and I personally wouldn’t make any major changes to either of those areas. The one big thing that I would recommend doing is adding more in terms of linking nursing specifically to all the points you make (I listed some …
English 110 interview link
Blog 10
Writing prompt 2 Outline: Thesis (first draft): In pharmacy the ideal relationship between art and science is a high level of empathy borrowed from art to be able to connect to patients so pharmacists can give the proper personal care to a patient by maintaining strong patient provider lines of communication, the other creative aspects …
Blog 9
Both Pinker and Lehrer agree that reductionalism isn’t the perfect system to understand all of the world around us. In Lehrer’s publication “The future of science … is art?” Lehrer remarks that “The novelist and the painter and the poet embrace those ephemeral aspects of the mind that cannot be reduced, or dissected, or translated …
