My major goals of revision are to do the normal clean up that I do to clean up my free draft (para organization, sentence length, surface errors, citations exc) due to the way I free draft. I need to cut at least 100 words if not more to get into word count. I need to …
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150 word note
You did a really good job keeping your essay clean and concise. Every point that you made I felt you explored and tied up very neatly. You also somehow managed to fully support every claim and idea you made well below the maximum word count while exploring material that would likely have taken me 1500 …
Blog 6
First of all I definitely wouldn’t wouldn’t say my first draft experience was as dreary and panicky as hers (although it was at least a little bit panicky and dreary.) It was also different in that I at least made an attempt to keep it organized and coherent although it of course needs more polish …
Blog 0
I like ePortfolio because I think that it is going to organize my assignments in a visually appealing way. Unfortunately I’ve never been that great with computers so the navigation and technology is a bit of a learning curve for me but I really think that this is at the very least a way for …
